Sunday, February 26, 2012

Fantabulous February - Day Twenty Six!

Namaste Doston! 

SO, other than the fact I missed writing on that amzing bulb crashing to the floor...with 1 hour to go; I'm back in the FANTABULOUS FEBRUARY with day 26! *drum roll* 

Today's inspiration:

Sunshine

Every time I close my eyes
I only see your face
Through sea green doors
And drunken stupors
You’re the sunflower that I chase.

I yearn for lost moments, midnight trysts
To wake up to a painless morn
Through imperfections of my wooden wall
Your smile is always the dawn.

Behind closed doors,
Your sunshine grows
Heartache and regret remain
Knowing that to tear down this wall
Would only end in senseless pain.

I yearn for starry nights, random bickering
Hate to wake up to a painless morn
Through creaks and cracks of my wooden wall
Your smile, my love is always; always the dawn.


Okay it's the same old romantic stuff...and you'll go "God that same old shit. B.O.R.I.N.G!". But for the utterly romantic ( read: Anuja darling :P (Now have I crossed it? :P ) it never gets old. Anyway, it's a simple little poem with a lot of heart, the cliched way of saying it! Hope you feel the love, 
and about that do check out 
Kanika's post here :http://stone-paper-scissor.blogspot.in/2012/02/fantabulous-february-day-twenty-six.html
And Anuja's here: http://thetimesofmylifelovendhim.blogspot.in/2012/02/fantabulous-february-day-26.html


And DOES THE PICTURE BRING THIS TO YOUR MIND FIRST THING? cos mine so did! 

(just saying its the best)

To my sunshines out there,
SAM B 

21 comments:

  1. "simple little poem with a lot of heart, the cliched way of saying it!" is good! Ye had to say it, ye did. Let the world sue ;)

    And good lord, the picture.

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  2. :O :O i mean really! darun shotti loved it! P.S DO NOT TELL ME I AM EXAGGERATING! u knw very well that i LOVE love! thus its pretty normal ... nd when u write toh fir baat hi alag ho jaati hai ;)

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  3. @Nil

    Okay, THAT was quick. And you know what, your post could so come under today's inspiration! U just TOOK part in the FANTA FEB! :D

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  4. @Anuja

    Okay that is exaggeration! HONEY, you are amazing! I loved ur interpretation. And I know you love LOVE :P Just dont start imagining OTT stuff! HEHE

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  5. Arre ladki sometimes cliche is good.
    Also, I love what you write. Not just this, everything. It is sincere, without wax :-)

    Plus how can romance not be good enough :-P

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  6. It's so sweet and nice.
    And romantic is never cliche. It's optimistic and refreshing.

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  7. Wish I could weave words gracefully into poetries like these!

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  8. @Antara
    Okay, you've been saying that pretty persistently the last few days. Too much of sweet words, I loved you slapping me and calling me pagol. Let's get back to that shall we? :P

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  9. @Shiromi *

    That's true. And thank you. But I believe I should somehow try different genres which you do beautifully :)

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  10. @Dandelion
    Thank you. Means a lot :)

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  11. You think so? I'm told I'm very typecast and write the same things over and over again :|

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  12. awesome wordplay Sam :)
    and I love romantic stuff for one thing and this one DEFINITELY isnt boring!!!

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  13. I'm becoming such a huge fan of the matchey-matchey good ol' love poetry,thanks to Fantabulous February and the equally fantabulous writers participating in it! T.S.Elliot must be REALLY angry with me.:P
    Well done.

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  14. Very well written! Good to find another blogger from Calcutta!

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  15. I see his brown eyes each time I close mine.

    Awww. sweetie, this is beautiful. and it's not boring at all. i love reading such lovely posts like this, full of passion, full of soul.

    I adore you.

    xoxo

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  16. @eprilis

    That made my day. Thanks a ton hon :)
    Much love!

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  17. romance is never boring..especially dark painful romance..we all find a resonance of some past relationship in it!!

    http://sushmita-smile.blogspot.in/

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